I'm wondering if there's a name (preferably a nice Graeco-Latin name) for knowingly using a poorly-fitting simile or metaphor. For example, the following line from a friend's LiveJournal:
"A nicely lit fishtank in a darkened room can kind of be like a glowing fireplace, just wet. And not warm."
"A nicely lit fishtank in a darkened room can kind of be like a glowing fireplace, just wet. And not warm."